comics and drawings!!... Constructive criticism welcome and needed

[Teh Geek Lord]

You do not need any dialogue in those panels. It makes it so much better knowing that the guys is currently not saying anything, but just turns and shoots some guy.

Dialogue is not given for the reason that even though the art may be mine, the story and comic that its for is not mine, and since the story is not mine to give away, I removed the text from the bubbles as its a key moment in the story.  Also, this page will never see print is practice.  I should have said this after I posted it, my bad.   I posted this so i can get a gauge on my improvements from my earlier comics now that I am an apprentice with a professional artist.

[Teh Geek Lord]

I know the coloring is a little rough, at least I think it is, but I wasl imited tomy cheapo mouse, the wacom tablet pen bit the dust

Full size can be seen here:  http://swain-slave.deviantart.com/art/Commander-Cross-FINAL-132312539


and a little something else of the random


can be viewed here:

http://swain-slave.deviantart.com/art/RAHHHHHH-130017923

[karkaputto]

@teh geek lord: i dunno, the gradient background just makes it look...amateurish?  and also the yellow on the hair and the blue on the jacket looks not so good.  other than that, it looks great







there's more here: http://karkaputto.deviantart.com/gallery/

[Teh Geek Lord]

its been a while since I've been here (joined the national guard, went through basic and such...)

But I've got some drawings to throw into this thread to keep it alive!



The latest, lots of work put into pose and proportions, hopefully and improvement over the other drawings of mine...



toyed with perspective on this one, and found out the image was too big for my scanner... :\


This one is going to get finished digitally, so it seems kinda bland right now, but its a Bronco I drew without much references... But the end goal is to have it leaping on a rough back woods road... more or less a practice image for later on.


full size image here: http://fc00.deviantart.com/fs48/i/2009/216/8/5/The_Gauntlet_part_1_no_words_by_Swain_slave.jpg



Large view images can be had at: www.swain-slave.deviantart.com

[Teh Geek Lord]

http://swain-slave.deviantart.com/art/Smooth-Operator-144726420 Full size here