Fun Stuff > MAKE
Ok, need encouragement/ideas
Xyclone:
ok so no this isn't comic pluggin, since this will be the one and only complete strip I will ever post here, just looking for feedback on this test-one I've put together, enjoy
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b366/adamspn/STRIP1.jpg
P.S. you might want to download it so you can zoom in, ALOT of time went into the details, plus might be alittle easier on the eyes ;-)
Xyclone:
also I know I forgot to put stuble on him, hey no ones perfect :-P
Kirbo:
/clap
Only complaint, somewhat hard to read.
Xyclone:
agreed, once i got it posted i realized that, still got bugs to work out on formatting too so keep the comments coming and like i said, prolyl easiest thing to do is download the jpg and just zoom in
Stifled Dreams:
Lookin' good. Punctuate a bit more (missing a comma and a period) and update regularly and I'd read it.
Now, for the punctuation, it may seem like I'm being nitpicky, but I feel like for comics, the lettering should be pretty close to perfect - especially since it isn't hard to fix.
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