Okay, in case you doubt my credentials for reviewing things, I write for
www.rockmidgets.com, so I do this kind of shit all the time. I've also been a musician for ten years.
Things that struck me:
- 'Brutality' isn't a very good name for a band.
- The riff was okay, but that guitar tone is awful. It's like mud.
- The drumming's a bit one-dimensional.
- The verse part is better, although the drums are still a little bland. The vocals hold the song together. The chorus could do with a slightly stronger melody.
- The solo is too low in the mix, it needs to be brought to the far front. As for the quality of the solo itself, it fits the song; it's not the kind of solo I like myself, though, but that's irrelevant because it works with the rest of the song.
- As a general point, I quite liked the dynamic, but it could do with being streamlined slightly.
