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My friend emma with a cat

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NecroAd:

--- Quote from: liquid architecture ---first off nice work.

but as mentioned the perspective needs work.

it seems like you drew from memory more than from observation.
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Yup, drew Emma more from memory. And thank you : ).


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you could also do a bit of research on perspective theory... maybe a bit boring but when you understand how to build a perspective you'll understand what you see much better.
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Sounds interesting. I might look into that.


--- Quote from: Justin ---
a lot of good advice here, i don't think i have anything to add other than: this drawing has a nice quality to it i think, i actually sort of like how the perspective is, even though it's not true to reality i just like how it looks. anyway you've got potential to be sure. keep it up!

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Thank you :D

Neuvost:
Cute. I like it. Other than the terrible sense of perspective, it's got a nice vibe to it. The coloring and shading is really where it shines. The actual line work could use some work, but that's just something that improves as you draw more. Which you should do! Get to it!

NecroAd:

--- Quote from: Neuvost ---Cute. I like it. Other than the terrible sense of perspective, it's got a nice vibe to it. The coloring and shading is really where it shines. The actual line work could use some work, but that's just something that improves as you draw more. Which you should do! Get to it!
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Will do! *drawing more stuff like a maniac*

OK, another thing to show you guys! Not quite sure on everything that's off about it, I know the torso and the leg size are wrong, but yeah.

TrueNeutral:
I think the body is too square. The waist should have more of a ) . ( shape, the dot being the position of the bellybutton. Also, the legs are the same width as the hips, which legs usually are not.

Female figure is one of the hardest things to draw, though. I made all the mistakes you made at some point, and I still make a bunch of mistakes now.

Also, look at other artists and just generally at the actual thing to see how pants and shoes work together. That's a really difficult bit to draw, and just doing it by feel is pretty much a lost cause unless you've had practice.

Overall, though, good job. I really like your sense of color.

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