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dancarter:
Cool stuff.  I dig the style very much, it will be interesting to see where the style heads as you refine it more. My only suggestion is to lower the saturation on some of your colours, it'll add some depth and separation.  Yellows in particular are a bit hard on the eyes at the levels they're at, but only in the thrid strip as there's just so much of it.  Again, very nice stuff.

falconire:
I see what you're saying with the yellow and shading is something I've been working on lately... Not always to the best but practice makes perfect.

Lewis Rice:
Well, if it isn't Falconire! Thought the criticizem of the Penny Arcade forums was to intense? I don't blame you. Allthough some of them actually wanted to help you, yet here you are with the same strip. My criticizem? Everything that the nice ones on Penny Arcade said. You have the tip of the story, and your artwork is very original and could develop into an amazingly strange/interesting style. So just keep working on it and don't give up.

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