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Falcon Imperator:
I may or may not put this in my portfolio for applying to college. It needs some touch-ups, but the general idea is there.

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/1579/img0436dt6.jpg

Any comments or criticisms are welcome. I know that the amount of fog there makes it look empty, but I really don't know what to do with the space. Also, it was taken on camera, as my scanner is pretty bad, but it's preserved for the most part.

KharBevNor:
The fog doesn't match the contours of the mountains properly.

ThePQ4:
This isn't going to be helpful, but just a personal clarification: Is that a -giant slug- under that tree??!!

Falcon Imperator:
That's a tree growing out of the giant slug!

Hmm, I'll try to make the fog a bit more convincing.

Sherwood WindRunner:
It's very nice, very original (It's a tree slug. Heh he heh.....). It's nice overall, but coloring and some sort of drawing in the valley would be nice.

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