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John Dies at the End

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Jackie Blue:
I think my feelings for the writing quality of this "novel" can be summed up in this little gem of a passage:

"I sat heavily on the edge of the bed. Whose room was this? A voice from behind me said, “Are you going to get that?”

I fumbled around and found a button on the alarm. Jennifer Lopez was in the bed. And I mean the actress.

Oh, wait. No, she rolled over and it was just the local Jennifer Lopez. She got out of bed, in a tank top and underwear, and sleepily walked off to what I guess was a bathroom. She had a faint, white scar at the top of her thigh. She farted softly as she closed the door."

est:
"Creative" writing at its finest

KickThatBathProf:
I think my brain just died a little

That was fuckin terrible

onewheelwizzard:
::winces at everything::

Suzi:
Well shit.. Every one that I have given my book to.. has like eaten it up within days, and loved it. So I'm sad that nobody on the internet loves it as much as we do. :/

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