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thegreatbuddha:
Film noir, pirates, ice cream
ZJGent:
The Devil and the Deep
The name’s Crevice, Larson Crevice. You want to know what I do? I find people. That’s my job. Of course, finding people involves a lot of waiting. That’s how I found myself sitting in my freezing cold Chevy at the harbour, eating melted ice-cream from the tub. The wind from the docks blew heavy and salty through the smoke of the city, and I shivered, and drew my coat around me against the cold. Hell of a night. You might be asking why I do this – this job that involves a lotta sitting around in Chevies eating ice cream outta tubs. Well I’ll tell you – it’s knowing that the creep I find who’s behind the whole deal is somewhere far away from my city, hopefully rotting in some cell. Speaking of which, someone just turned the corner. He’s wearing an expensive suit like he thinks he’s money, but the fake diamond tie-pin he’s sportin’ ain’t come from Tiffany’s. This guy, he’s been shipping the little computer music players from Taiwan – like those kids in California ain’t got enough problems, Christ…
The perp turns his head. The guy's handsome, got a sharp jawline you could cut cocaine with, but he’s got dirty eyes. You know that this slice of shit is just screamin’ to rat out his buddy boys left, right and centre. All he needs is the right pressure. That’s when I exit the beat-up Chevy and pull the hammer back on my .45.
There’s more than one kind of pressure, that’s for damn sure.
StMonkey:
Satire; Comics, or more specifically, webcomics
thegreatbuddha:
--- Quote from: ZJGent on 02 Mar 2008, 21:29 ---The Devil and the Deep
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A+ Would read again
ZJGent:
--- Quote from: StMonkey on 02 Mar 2008, 21:30 ---Satire; Comics, or more specifically, webcomics
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Really? For real? I mean, I will write something if you really want something on this - but it feels like you just said it because you thought it'd be funny given the nature of the forum this is on.
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