I like being a more liberal Christian(tattoos, metal, etc.).
Wouldn't call that liberal. Nope, not in a million years. You want "liberal Christian" take a gander at Quakers or some who contact my late grandfather. A theologian and co-founder of the Centre for Thomistic Studies.
FTB, HSC prelim. exams start tomorrow ans I can't bring myself to study. FUCK. If I can manage being bothered to study for English Adv. tomorrow, I'm going to type up my short story or re-write 'cause my teacher wrote the test she pretty much told me what I was lacking in my story. The conversation went something like this:
TEACHER: Tom, this story is really good, you've hit all the dot points of the rubric.
ME: Thanks Ms.
T: The narrative voice is fairly weak from the start but-
M: Yeah, that last line was was meant to be the stringest-
T: So you could show that she was whole. The only problem is that with all the shifting perspectives it could be hard for the responder to have anything 'real' to hold onto.
M: So I need an anchor.
T: Exactly, I could put it at the beginning - A reflection off the perspex of the train window.
M: It's a great idea but do you think you can manipulate to fit the question?
T: I'm certain I can by changing the nature of the memories and messing around withe structure of the nondescript urban setting where necessary.
M: Thanks, Tom.
Turns out providing and working in anchor isn't an easy thing to do without upsetting the mood/tone I created for it. I'll post it in the writing thread if I can be bothered.
Tom