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StaedlerMars:
Hey,

I'm designing a website for some friends, and I'm needing some feedback on the design so I'm turning to the artsy community of QC

so far this is what it looks like

Tell me what you think. Give negative feedback (constructive!).

Thanks

Vendetagainst:
Well that's not a whole lot to go off of, but I would say you should maybe slightly alter the text and maybe tighten up that red background thing so that it fits the text a little better. Also offer a few more screenshots or whatever.

StaedlerMars:
yeah, i've decided against that entire design.

the link is updated for the current looks.

BlakeJustBlake:
Yeah, there's really not much there to say anything about. Perhaps put something there, maybe some Lorem ipsum text just to see how content will be presented, or some more dummy links to see how the menus will be and how it will all work together.

Lines:
Yeah, you really need to change that font. Also, it could be nice if you toned the white to more of an off white (not beige, but just enough color to make it less blinding) and made the grey a little darker.

Otherwise, the navigation is simple and easy to use, which is good, and the actual layout isn't too bad. Play around a little more and it could look quite nice!

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