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BrilliantEraser:
I have been working on a comic called Traitor for a little over a year now. Mostly I have been writing and editing scripts, and I am finally at the drawing stage! Below is an example of my current artwork, inked and colored. Would anyone be willing to give constructive criticism/comments?
I already know that I need to work on perspective, since the hobo looks like he is part of a wall. Other than that, feel free to rip this to shreds.



You can check out the rest of Traitor at www.traitor-comic.blogspot.com. Please note that the first six strips were drawn by my good friend, who is an amazing artist.

Thanks!
Brilliant Eraser Productions

BrilliantEraser:
Here is another panel, for your consideration:

CarrionMan:
If you just angle the shots a little bit more horizontal it should look better. From this perspective, the people look like giants laying in the street.

Trollstormur:
take a course on anatomy and perspective. this is a constructive comment.

BrilliantEraser:
Thanks, Trollstormur. I am actually working on finding out what my college currently offers in the way of drawing seminars. I am not in the fine arts program, so it is near impossible for me to get into any of the actual classes. :|

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