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Loki:
I also have a half-finished short story, but I am still struggling with some dialogue atm.
Zebediah:
--- Quote from: Gareth on 01 May 2014, 04:38 ---Well shit, guys, shall we all just have a go at it then? Zebediah's making us all look like chumps!
--- End quote ---
And an ill-timed bout with the stomach flu is making me look like a chump. It'll be Monday at the earliest before I feel up to finishing this thing.
Loki:
So I am sleep deprived, which is why what I wrote may be slightly disturbing.
(click to show/hide)She was a beauty, he thought.
Despite being over forty years old, and looking slightly battered, she had not yet lost her charms. He longed to at least touch her, despite knowing of the destiny that was awaiting her and that would soon tear them apart.
He found herself coming closer to her, until they finally touched. Then current shot through him and he lost consciousness, as always.
When he came by, he found he had lifted her high into the air and was just letting go of her. He tried clinging to her some more, but to no avail.
He watched in horror as she dropped a few meters into a small room, where she was crushed into a tiny cube of plastic and metal.
"You know", said one of the junk yard workers to the other, "the way he clings to the cars, I sometimes cannot help but think the electromagnet is sentient".
Thrillho:
That is fucking brilliant.
Welu:
I like that a lot!
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