Comic Discussion > ALICE GROVE
Alice Grove MCDT - January 2015
jwhouk:
Comic!
And we're at the end of chapter one.
Ardent and Gavia are trapped in Alice's Grove.
mikmaxs:
Oh no! They're trapped! If only I knew what this meant, empathized with these characters, or had some semblance of grounding to understand why I should care...
Also, I wonder... It says 'End of chapter one'. Does this mean this was supposed to be the equivalent of a single chapter of a book or whatever, or does it just mean that it's a break point in the story and there's about to be a time-skip or something?
Wildroses:
--- Quote from: mikmaxs on 29 Jan 2015, 20:40 ---Oh no! They're trapped! If only I knew what this meant, empathized with these characters, or had some semblance of grounding to understand why I should care...
--- End quote ---
I'll tell you why you should care, it's the same reason Alice cares. It's because she and everyone else on that unfortunate world is stuck with the little horrors until their Praeses decide to take them back! I bet Alice off screen was hoping Gavia would succeed so she could go back to taking care of her town and not dealing with Ardent hitting on every female in sight and Gavia who thinks explosions are a great way to solve problems.
Though for my harsh words, I do think that we aren't supposed to like Gavia and Ardent yet. I think that is due to happen later, after they go through some steep learning curves and period of adjustment. We could potentially have a chapter two of Gavia and Ardent struggling to adjust to primitive life, but I think it equally likely Alice is going to instantly start pulling every string she has and every trick she knows in trying to get the little horrors back where they belong, i.e. not with her.
Kugai:
Cue freakout by Gavia in 3 .... 2 .... 1
*Fade to black*
Titles over with dramatic music
TO BE CONTINUED...
ysth:
--- Quote from: jwhouk on 29 Jan 2015, 20:31 ---Ardent and Gavia are trapped in Alice's Grove.
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No, it seems the Praeseses are the Grove, and the Vicissitudes are trapped out of it.
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