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WCDT 2937-2941 (13 - 17 April 2015)

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TRVA123:
Yes, I think everyone understands that point. However, these are not real people who happen to hang out with us. This is a story. The author can make choices of what to portray and how to portray it.

And I get it, Jephs house, Jephs rules. And I respect that. But that doesn't mean that I am going to refrain from critiquing a story that I am obviously very invested in.

I personally think that the overall pacing of the story has been too slow, and that, just as a television show can ruin their dynamic by overemphasizing a crowd favorite, we are being overexposed to Clairten. There are so many stories that can be told right now, and while I understand that not every plot thread will be completed, I would really appreciate development in a few of those areas. What happened to Sven? Can we have another AI subplot? How are Dora and Tai doing?

Is it cold in here?:
(mod)Critiques are completely OK. It's not like you gave Jeph orders or picked a fight with the entire forum, which others have done.(/mod)

Rghfrgl:
I don't think that, currently, we're being overexposed to Clariten or that we aren't getting other stories. Marten and Claire have been in strips recently, but they haven't been 'Marten and Claire' strips. They've been about Claire and *Faye*(Which is something people including myself wanted, her interacting with more of the cast and not just being Marten's girlfriend) and about using Claire as a catalyst to tell the Clinton and Emily story, which right there is two characters who haven't gotten a lot of focus.

General slow pacing I can certainly see as a valid point. For Sven and Dora, they're pretty tied to Faye and I think Faye needs to reach a certain point before we can go there. I don't think we'll be seeing much Dora until they make up. And if Sven showed up right now he'd get splattered against a wall.

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