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torg:
A friend of mine has her birthday next week. I always like to give her something special. This year I came up with the idea to draw her rpg character and put it on a t-shirt.
I've been working sporadically on this sketch for some weeks now. Now it's finished and I'd like to start to ink and colour it tonight  or tomorrow. But first I'd like to have some comments and criticism. So if you were her, would you like to get it on a shirt? Does it look ok so far or are there some serious mistakes that I don't notice? Or ist it just crap?

Tinjessla:
I think it looks spankin'! :) I especially like the details of her wings and her boots. The foreshortening on her right arm looks a tad odd to me though.

P.S The way you've drawn the hands is EXACTLY how i end up drawing them. But for it is because of my totally inability to draw the blasted things. We should all have stumps on the ends of our arms.

Digs:
Wow, that's really strong art. You're quite sure of yourself, I can feel it! You have to show us the finished product, too.

Apathy:
I like it.  The hands do look as if they're lacking detail but that's not always a bad thing at all.  Sometimes it's just the artist's style.  Look at CAD for example.  If that's something you know she'd like in theory, then I'm sure she'll like the practical product definitely, because the bottom line is that it's very good.

Staplegun:
That's really solid. I like it a lot. Get workin' on that, I wanna see a finished product!

Keep up the good work. Hot damn.

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