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Coreh:
I draw stuff for friends at school when I'm bored. Recently I started drawing a little robot, I like the way it came out, but I think it could be better. Mainly I'm looking for new ways to draw the legs. They just look awkward the way they are. But if you see anything that could be better, just let me know how it could be better.

Here's the link to the image. Note that I had to draw it on MSPaint so it's not the best quality, he looks better on paper with pencil.
http://img153.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img153&image=robotconceptdrawing3lk.png

Please help me. :)

vampire duck:
It's a cool design, but it could use something on the torso, maybe, like a symbol or an ice dispenser, and the leg problem could be fixed by giving it four spider-legs or something else of the ass-kicking variety.  He/she/it sort of reminds me of Pintsize meets White Ninja, but maybe that's just the MSPaint effect.  Keep up the good work!

Coreh:
I thought about putting the thing that pintsize has on his torso. But stealing someone else's idea is no fun.

3Z3VH:
The torso is so big and devoid of detail that it holds too much weight in the picture.  If you reduced it's size, or broke up the bifg white area it creates it would look a lot better.

Coreh:
Thanks for your help everybody. I just learned how to shade the other day. So he looks better, but I can't shade on a computer.

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