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Fan art of Dora
Sophiee:
I imagine Dora as dancer skinny. Kinda lithe.
bainidhe_dub:
i love your style! i feel like the mannishness might be in part because of the porportions between shoulders and hips but how to tweak it isn't immediately obvious..
Sophiee:
This might be helpful- I hope this isn't nitpicking,...the neck muscles may just need to be softened...there is something with the neck. I don't know. I think the clavicle is good.
The more i look at her the more right she looks. It's probably just a stylistic thing.
Luke:
As I was reading through this, I was planning on commenting on that. She's got too much muscle in the neck; try making it smaller and less triangular in that point. Also, you might try making the torso less triangular as well.
One more pointer, try making the eyebrows skinnier.
Enough of the crit, this is an awesome piece of art. I think all you need to do is tweak your visuals a bit.
Sophiee:
i'm ok with the eyebrows.
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