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BSG:
I had never done a character sketch before, and had always done hard line art.  Needless to say, I didn't know what I was missing.  I've since given BSG a little makeover [If you have NO clue what I'm talking about, go here] and swooshed his hair over.  Furthermore, I've given him a little bit more character with some anime influences.

Hope you like it:



Any suggestions to improve him?

BSG

BSG:
I'm going to make one bump, which is probably going to make people hate me, but that's all.  Just one.

Rawr and Stuff:
Alright, so because you bumped, gonna reply.

You definitely have your own style working for ya, but I have to admit I'm not a huge fan of anime artwork so the anime influences...are optional to me.

But I like the look of the sketches and it seems a bit better then the last comics you posted. I'd like to see some colored versions of this style...that'd be cool. But good work.

BSG:
I'm actually considering coloring the sketches and then hardlining the sketch a bit, deleting the light sketch and doing the comic as a sketch-comic completely, as I enjoy it far more than the cartooned comics I posted formerly.

Oh, and I really am not an anime type, either, but I have to admit the style snuck in without my knowledge :-P

Thanks for the feedback.

est:
i'd suggest going over your sketches with a firmer hand afterwards so that your lines look smoother, then erasing the sketch lines.  i can see the style that you're shooting for, and it's nice to see someone who is going for something that hasn't already been done to death.  i think that if you can firm up your lines it'll start to look really good.

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