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Fun Stuff => MAKE => Topic started by: ComfortEagle on 19 Aug 2006, 10:14

Title: Can you hear me Major Tom?
Post by: ComfortEagle on 19 Aug 2006, 10:14

Iv'e been working on this in my design class, our assignment was to design a classic rock poster, well at least what bands our teacher liked, and I got David Bowie.

Comments and ideas? This is our first project and I want it to rock.( Though it's not as impressive as a phonograh made out of legos.)
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v490/patbert/TheDavidPoster.jpg)

Title: Can you hear me Major Tom?
Post by: Spinless on 19 Aug 2006, 10:46

CRAFTS PEOPLE.
THIS IS THE ARTS AND CRAFTS FORUMS, NOT THE DRAWINGS AND DIGITAL THINGY.

That said, it's quite nice. Fill that big empty space in the middle/top.

Title: Can you hear me Major Tom?
Post by: ComfortEagle on 19 Aug 2006, 10:50

I plan to,  I plan to put David Bowie in big plink letters.

Title: Can you hear me Major Tom?
Post by: Lines on 19 Aug 2006, 15:56

the bottom left david doesn't seem to blend into the black as well as the others.

Title: Can you hear me Major Tom?
Post by: KibBen on 19 Aug 2006, 17:23

Quote from: Spinless

CRAFTS PEOPLE.
THIS IS THE ARTS AND CRAFTS FORUMS, NOT THE DRAWINGS AND DIGITAL THINGY.

That said, it's quite nice. Fill that big empty space in the middle/top.

Just to adress this: The titles are a little misleading. The "Comics and Drawings" forum lends one to believe it's for comicy drawings, whereas this one is for "Arts and Crafts.

Title: Can you hear me Major Tom?
Post by: ComfortEagle on 19 Aug 2006, 23:42

Too true KibBen, I honestlyagree with you, or mabey it tis the late night techno and caffine rush.

Title: Can you hear me Major Tom?
Post by: logosmonkey on 19 Aug 2006, 23:55

The biggest problem is the empty space on the lower left hand side of the poster. You need to fill that space a bit more.. perhaps shifting one of the images further to the left or placing another one in; otherwise it's just off balance to the eye... while the white at the top right does help a little.
I think once you have the text added in it will look a lot better as well.

Title: Can you hear me Major Tom?
Post by: ComfortEagle on 22 Aug 2006, 16:03

Almost done.
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v490/patbert/DavidBowiepostercopy.jpg)

Title: Can you hear me Major Tom?
Post by: Night Rocker on 22 Aug 2006, 16:06

the left side needs a little something

Title: Can you hear me Major Tom?
Post by: ComfortEagle on 22 Aug 2006, 20:59

I see, well im looking for another Bowie phase, or I could draw in a SPIDER FROM MARS!!!!!!!!!!!!..yeah, late night caffine rush, im a little goofy.

Title: Can you hear me Major Tom?
Post by: Kid Modernist on 23 Aug 2006, 02:04

I think the background looked better black in white, but that it would be best with a darker color instead of purple.

Title: Can you hear me Major Tom?
Post by: KharBevNor on 23 Aug 2006, 03:55

The elements are too seperate from each other. Try posterising the bowie photos.

Title: Can you hear me Major Tom?
Post by: ComfortEagle on 23 Aug 2006, 19:26

I have to have some elements of  colour in it for the grade, but I will take a look at the posterising...