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Title: Frozen Explosion
Post by: niKarr on 20 May 2008, 13:54

so, I am thinking about starting a weekly webcomic... Not 100% though.
Just wondering what you all think of my style.

(http://i26.tinypic.com/2m7xkxk.jpg)
http://i26.tinypic.com/2m7xkxk.jpg (for the fast enternets challenged)

And if you'd like to see more random things I've drawn: http://niKarr.deviantart.com

Yeah. Just... Wondering.

Title: Re: Frozen Explosion
Post by: Joim on 20 May 2008, 14:03

The drawing's so neat, but the woman's face lacks pain >=)

Title: Re: Frozen Explosion
Post by: niKarr on 20 May 2008, 14:49

Pain? Hehe. She didn't cut herself if that's what ya meant. Wine kinda.. exploded... everywhere. Its supposed to look like a "oh man.. I can't believe I just did this" type of face.
But if you meant something else entirely, please feel free to elaborate. I love feedback! :3

Title: Re: Frozen Explosion
Post by: Joim on 20 May 2008, 15:46

Quote from: niKarr on 20 May 2008, 14:49

Pain? Hehe. She didn't cut herself if that's what ya meant. Wine kinda.. exploded... everywhere. Its supposed to look like a "oh man.. I can't believe I just did this" type of face.
But if you meant something else entirely, please feel free to elaborate. I love feedback! :3

I though part of the bottle exploded too :P

Title: Re: Frozen Explosion
Post by: tomselleck69 on 20 May 2008, 16:26

1. Get a font made for comics from here: http://blambot.com/fonts.shtml
2. Hands-drawing practice. The girl's are fine, but the boy's entire arm needs fixing.

Title: Re: Frozen Explosion
Post by: est on 20 May 2008, 17:23

The drawing itself looks pretty good, but the speech bubbles look a bit off somehow.  Perhaps it's the lack of outline, or maybe their placement.  Not sure which, or if it's both.  Play around with the placement and the look of them and hopefully you'll get what I mean.