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Title: Ghosts - A collection of controversial ghost humor (NSF56K)
Post by: math0ne on 24 May 2006, 01:01

I'm looking for some opinions regarding the direction of my comic, Ghosts.

If you have a few minutes, check out a chunk of my comics below and let me know what you think.

I’m specifically wondering if people think we're going in the right direction with stand-alone single panel comics and divergent drawing styles.

OR

Whether we should be moving to a more arched story line type of setup with more consistent art.

(http://ghosthumor.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/04/ghostjoke.jpg)
(http://ghosthumor.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/04/ghostjoke2.jpg)
(http://ghosthumor.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/04/doghost1.jpg)
(http://ghosthumor.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/04/doghost2.jpg)
(http://ghosthumor.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/04/doghost31.jpg)
(http://ghosthumor.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/04/prekillarious.jpg)
(http://ghosthumor.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/04/ghost-04-16-06.jpg)
(http://ghosthumor.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/04/ghost-04-17-06.jpg)
(http://ghosthumor.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/04/ghost-04-18-06.jpg)
(http://ghosthumor.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/04/ghosts-04-20-06.jpg)
(http://ghosthumor.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/04/ghosts-04-21-06-real.jpg)
(http://ghosthumor.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/04/ghosts-04-25-06.jpg)
(http://ghosthumor.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/04/ghosts-04-26-06.jpg)
(http://ghosthumor.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/04/ghosts-04-27-06.jpg)
(http://ghosthumor.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/04/ghosts-04-27-06-2.jpg)
(http://ghosthumor.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/04/ghosts-04-30-06.jpg)
(http://ghosthumor.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/05/ghosts-05-03-06.jpg)
(http://ghosthumor.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/05/ghosts-05-04-06.jpg)
(http://ghosthumor.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/05/ghosts-05-05-061.jpg)
(http://ghosthumor.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/05/ghosts-05-09-061.jpg)
(http://ghosthumor.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/05/ghosts-05-10-06.jpg)
(http://ghosthumor.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/05/ghosts-05-15-06.jpg)   
(http://ghosthumor.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/05/ghosts-05-16-06.jpg)
(http://ghosthumor.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/05/ghosts-05-17-06.jpg)
(http://ghosthumor.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/05/ghosts-05-18-06.jpg)

Any crits or comments wanted!

Title: Ghosts - A collection of controversial ghost humor (NSF56K)
Post by: Scandanavian War Machine on 24 May 2006, 12:49

i like it. and i dont say that about many webcomics.
its unique, simple, and actually funny. well done

Title: Ghosts - A collection of controversial ghost humor (NSF56K)
Post by: mberan42 on 24 May 2006, 15:23

I really like the artwork. I know shit about art other than what I like, and I like yours. Looks watercoloured, sorta.

One thing I don't like is the font. Doesn't go at all with the style of the art. Find another more fitting font, or write in your own hand, or modify your own writing to fit the art.

I do like the humour, as well.

Reminds me of Animals Have Problems Too (http://www.animalshaveproblemstoo.com/index.php). (Jeph's buddy Zach's webcomic. Jeph did a guest strip (http://www.animalshaveproblemstoo.com/view.php?id=243) for it as well.)

Just my opinions, FWIW.

Title: Ghosts - A collection of controversial ghost humor (NSF56K)
Post by: math0ne on 24 May 2006, 15:28

Thanks for your comments guys!

I've totally been thinking about changing the font, now that i hear it from someone else i think i actually will.

Title: Ghosts - A collection of controversial ghost humor (NSF56K)
Post by: math0ne on 25 May 2006, 00:49

(http://ghosthumor.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/05/ghosts-05-25-06.jpg)

Check the new font!

Title: Ghosts - A collection of controversial ghost humor (NSF56K)
Post by: mberan42 on 25 May 2006, 09:05

Much better.

Title: Ghosts - A collection of controversial ghost humor (NSF56K)
Post by: xeyexlinerx on 25 May 2006, 13:18

Those are awesome and I love the new font. Well done:) let us know when you draw some more.