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Fun Stuff => MAKE => Topic started by: ComfortEagle on 10 Jan 2005, 21:03

Title: fear factor
Post by: ComfortEagle on 10 Jan 2005, 21:03

bad art. ment to get a point across, tell me if its funny or not

Title: fear factor
Post by: 3Z3VH on 11 Jan 2005, 10:03

I had trouble following the flow of the dialogue.  You want them go from top to bottom, with the line you want the user to read first being higher than the others.

Also, I didn't really get it, but that could just be due to my TV ignorance.

Title: fear factor
Post by: katie on 11 Jan 2005, 10:09

Upon first reading it, no. It confused me. And like Haeze, I had trouble knowing where to start. I had to read it though a few times before I got the order right.
You're just pointing out obvious things about Fear Factor and cramming it into one frame.