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Fun Stuff => MAKE => Topic started by: mosfet on 31 Mar 2005, 06:09
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Well Today is my dad's birthday, so I whipped something up for him.
I drew this one up real quick last night. Sketch on paper on the train home, then scan/print/ink/scan/colored.
After that I added in the flames and smoke on the background.
(http://www.podmonkeys.com/comics/special/20050331-400.jpg)
My wife says the flames and smoke look great. Emphasis on GREAT! I personally think they look like crap that I could have drawn as a kid. (granted I only spent about 10 minutes tops on them)
What do you all think?
(also I need a new font. Chalkboard looks too much line Comic Sans) :P
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I think in the context of the piece as a whole, the flames look great. The smoke seems to get heavier as it gets farther from the flame, which seems backwards.
The lighting also seems...not right, considering there's a flaming inferno there... (not that I'm exactly a master of lighting...in fact, I try to avoid it all together...)
As for your desire for a new font, go try blambot.com (http://blambot.com/).
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yeah. I'll be the first to say I suck at the shading.
I didn't notice the smoke getting heavier at the top, so I guess I'll have to take a look. I whipped it up real quick, so I didn't pay too much attention.
ah yeah. I just looked at the pic again. My lighting is my usual front lighting. oops! :)
thanks for the comments!
Also thanks for the link. I'll be checking that out today.