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Shrinkydinks

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Re: My final photoshop project, suggestions?
« on: 19 Feb 2008, 20:46 »

Uhmm the forum ate my first post, here's what it said

http://never-perfection.deviantart.com/art/Imaging-final-project-77893715

That is where I am at with it right now.

We had to take a phrase and illustrate it using at least three images and at least three words of text with an effect applied to it.

Any critiques of this would be really helpful to me.

Thanks!
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Re: My final photoshop project, suggestions?
« Reply #1 on: 19 Feb 2008, 22:01 »

Hmm, try applying a few photo filters. A nice sepia-ish overtone would be pretty cool.
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Shrinkydinks

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Re: My final photoshop project, suggestions?
« Reply #2 on: 19 Feb 2008, 22:52 »

I added some filters and edited the file so you can see the newer version. I changed the composition a little bit as well.

I don't want to use a sepia because I want the colors to be very vibrant and eye catching. Otherwise I agree it would look really neat.
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roulettescars

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Re: My final photoshop project, suggestions?
« Reply #3 on: 09 Mar 2008, 20:11 »

I'd say maybe soften the colors up a little bit, or try using the lighting effects to get a little more contrast. The lighting on the grass and the playground seem to be coming from different directions. Other than that It looks great.
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