Well, normally I'd say you shouldn't start your own thread for plugging a comic, but the artwork on yours is absolutely astoundingly good. the writing is a little, well, it needs some work we'll say. Good story, but there's a couple typos, and some grammar issues, and you could probably stand to rethink the order you're presenting the story. All that said whoever drew this (not sure which of the pair you are) has got the hand of a professional.
Also, take this with a grain of salt, everyone's a critic, and maybe I'm the only one who'd be confused somewhat by the writing. I'm only an amateur writer who's never written much of anything to talk about, so who gives a fuck what I say Eh? Four
out of five.
Edit: I'm also reading Lead Pain because of the review, Rockin' out man.
