I'm usually a big fan of this kind of storytelling. Give the reader the pieces and let their imagination fill in the blanks. However, there isn't much to say about the four bits you have posted so far. We're kind of being thrown into the deep end here, and personally I would like a sort of introduction to the what and where, but I understand that this could defeat the purpose of the uh, experiment. To fit in wit the theme you could possibly put yourself, the author, in the story and put in excerpts of the hypothetical book that was written about it.
I could see this work akin to a collection of correspondence, presented as an ongoing history of a person's life, only in a much more cryptic, murder-mystery kind of fashion. One potential pitfall would be that the story moves too slowly, or becomes confusing, if the information only comes in small bursts from an arbitrary medium. So I believe the reader would benefit from this information coming in bundles, much like letters, only arranged by the medium or the subject.
That's just how I would do it, so I wouldn't blame you if you said I was talking nonsense. Anyway, I'm somewhat interested to see how this turns out.
