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meatbag

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Which version do you like better
« on: 16 Nov 2010, 13:44 »
So I wrote a song, entitled Freezemylungs. The first: I just plugged into GarageBand, fucked with the drums by adding some bitcrush on the drums, added a little distorted scream, and a Psychedelic EQ filter. So all in all, not a lot of effort. The second, my friend produced in Ableton Live and took him a couple days.

The first (Entitled, the Half Assed Version)http://soundcloud.com/anesthesiac/freezemylungs

The Second (Apes On Horses version)http://soundcloud.com/anesthesiac/freezemylungs-feat-apes-on-horses
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Re: Which version do you like better
« Reply #1 on: 16 Nov 2010, 15:01 »
Two of your first six posts should probably not be new topics.
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Re: Which version do you like better
« Reply #2 on: 16 Nov 2010, 15:45 »
I think so.
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Re: Which version do you like better
« Reply #3 on: 16 Nov 2010, 15:52 »
Nah dude, he's right.
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Re: Which version do you like better
« Reply #4 on: 16 Nov 2010, 15:56 »
Ok. You're right.

Can we actually contribute to the topic now
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Re: Which version do you like better
« Reply #5 on: 16 Nov 2010, 19:56 »
i thought "feat." was something you added if you were a cool rapper and wanted another cool rapper to rap in your rap

"produced by", that's a term i can get behind don't you know
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Quote from: Patrick on 30 Dec 2010, 03:07
And if you played too hard it'd flop out and dangle around by the wire and that is just super ugly

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Re: Which version do you like better
« Reply #6 on: 16 Nov 2010, 21:45 »
meh the 1st one was good till the end and then you kinda lost me in the transition. Seemed kinda forced.
2nd one was so much better the bells used went well with the rest of the track and when the tempo sped up it seemed natural.
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Re: Which version do you like better
« Reply #7 on: 16 Nov 2010, 23:36 »
jeepers are the newbies cocky lately
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Re: Which version do you like better
« Reply #8 on: 16 Nov 2010, 23:46 »
better that then the forum being stagnant
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Re: Which version do you like better
« Reply #9 on: 17 Nov 2010, 07:37 »
Quote from: Wasteroo on 16 Nov 2010, 23:36
jeepers are the newbies cocky lately
dude's avatar doesn't really help that perception.
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Re: Which version do you like better
« Reply #10 on: 17 Nov 2010, 08:43 »
Jens I would think it highly suspect for anyone to create this thread, even if the act of creating this thread was not literally like their sixth fucking post.
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Re: Which version do you like better
« Reply #11 on: 17 Nov 2010, 09:32 »
Quote from: KharBevNor on 17 Nov 2010, 08:43
Jens I would think it highly suspect for anyone to create this thread, even if the act of creating this thread was not literally like their sixth fucking post.

Blah blah elitists not wanting strangers muddying up their precious forum blah blah
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Re: Which version do you like better
« Reply #12 on: 17 Nov 2010, 09:39 »
dude's asking for advice on music he made, the fuck is suspect about that

i'm w/jens let's start fighting
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Re: Which version do you like better
« Reply #13 on: 18 Nov 2010, 01:24 »
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better that then the forum being stagnant

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Re: Which version do you like better
« Reply #14 on: 18 Nov 2010, 07:49 »
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Don't quote the post above you, peasant.

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Re: Which version do you like better
« Reply #15 on: 18 Nov 2010, 08:11 »
notes- around 42 seconds where the beat goes into double time, it feels awkward and terrible. right after that it sounds like you have a cool little melody, its way to quiet though. and what the fuck happens around 3 minutes it sounds like you took a part from a totally different song and pasted it over. also, i liked the end at first but then you took out that thing you started out with (what is that, a perfect 4th? i think thats what it sounds like?) and it breaks the "coming full circle effect" which it sounds like you wanted to go for but didn't quite pull off.
other version - first of all, yr friend mixes way better. his choice of effects are kind of lame, but the levels are so much more balanced. also yr friends last section is 10000x than yr last section (the one that starts around 3 minutes or so?) end still is kinda weak though.

not a bad idea, but the song is obviously still in its infancy. work on it more. and for shits sake, shift meters or something cause goddamn its kinda boring as is.
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