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Twenty years in an IsoCube - Judge Alice

1 (2.6%)

Assimilation - "We are the Alice, resistance is futile"

1 (2.6%)

A shock collar and no release till she cleans up her mess

3 (7.7%)

Flashback time

8 (20.5%)

Alice the Slavemaster

2 (5.1%)

We don't want to know

5 (12.8%)

Jeph surprises us

13 (33.3%)

Blue Ardent Dishwasher

6 (15.4%)

Total Members Voted: 36

[ReindeerFlotilla]

@Reindeer,

Your problem is the 'I am the world" fallacy. Just because you consider those things to be problems does not make that universally true. I, for one, will come back because, with these questions posed, I want to hear the answers and know that they may be many chapters away. To me, this is a feature, not a bug.

Nope. I don't have a problem. But thanks for playing.

Just because I can point out some structural issues with a work, it doesn't follow that the work is bad. In fact, I never said it was.

Pick up any book on writing and it will tell you same things I have. The game has rules. Like any game, the key is learning how they can be broken. But the rules don't exist to control fiction. They exist because 9 times of 10, not following them results in a bad story.

I'm not aware of any particular law that forbids me pontificating on issues as I see them, or rambling on about the mechanics and methods of story telling. I've been studying the subject for 33 years. I'm bound to have a point of view.

Your problem is the "I am the world fallacy." That you see someone disagreeing with your POV as a problem is rather egocentric, no?

[Kugai]

The Fate of ArdentSis


Twenty years in an IsoCube - Judge Alice .......... 1 (2.6%)
Assimilation - "We are the Alice, resistance is futile" .......... 1 (2.6%)
A shock collar and no release till she cleans up her mess .......... 3 (7.7%)
Flashback time .......... 8 (20.5%)
Alice the Slavemaster .......... 2 (5.1%)
We don't want to know .......... 5 (12.8%)
Jeph surprises us .......... 13 (33.3%)
Blue Ardent Dishwasher .......... 6 (15.4%)