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fear factor
« on: 10 Jan 2005, 21:03 »

bad art. ment to get a point across,">tell me if its funny or not


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fear factor
« Reply #1 on: 11 Jan 2005, 10:03 »

I had trouble following the flow of the dialogue.  You want them go from top to bottom, with the line you want the user to read first being higher than the others.

Also, I didn't really get it, but that could just be due to my TV ignorance.
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« Reply #2 on: 11 Jan 2005, 10:09 »

Upon first reading it, no. It confused me. And like Haeze, I had trouble knowing where to start. I had to read it though a few times before I got the order right.
You're just pointing out obvious things about Fear Factor and cramming it into one frame.
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