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Kel

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I'd like opinions on these, if you could.
« on: 23 Jan 2005, 17:53 »

I've been entertaining the idea of doing a webcomic for a while, now, but I'm not sure.  I'm still not sure.

The character I'd like to use is often pictured in my deviantart gallery, but I wouldn't want anyone to go fishing for them admist things that aren't the best, nor things that don't pertain to him.

His name is Jim Skinny, and I do have something of a story, but it would revolve around him.  Supporting characters would exist, but I just need comments on Jim himself.

Here are the images' links.  If you could help me out, I would grow flowers for you of such beauty you would not know!

http://www.deviantart.com/view/9126301/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/12956497/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/12485258/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/8086178/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/5492461/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/4784859/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/3939748/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/3986738/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/3963278/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/3957143/

That's about it of what's relevant right now.  You don't have to comment on all of them, just the general idea of Jim or something.  I want to share him with people because he's a special creation to me.  He's something that came up during hard times and doodling him became a release.  I'd like to share that feeling with everyone that would want to see it.

So, critique, comments, or just sunshine (if you really want) is encouraged.  Not so much the sunshine.  I want real opinions, not things to help me feel better.

Just remember that all of these are considered finished drawings, so I can't really change them.  But certain things about Jim for future references would work.  :)

Thank you so very much (in advance)!

(edit:  had to fix a link.  Darnit.)
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Coyote

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I'd like opinions on these, if you could.
« Reply #1 on: 23 Jan 2005, 18:37 »

Not bad. Expect a lot of people to ask the following questions:

Why does he have wings? Is he an angel? What kind of animal is he?

And of course by choosing 'furry' art you are accepting that you will be joining a fandom that has a certain... er... reputation about it.

He certainly is skinny. Add a bit of character and plot background for more. It's not just art, it's a story.
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torg

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I'd like opinions on these, if you could.
« Reply #2 on: 24 Jan 2005, 00:02 »

Whoa, it's great! I like his goth-y look. And you have a good understanding for the dynamics of movement. Awesome!
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