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daneford

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« on: 13 Apr 2005, 12:32 »

Now, I'm not plugging my site. Well, kind of, but I'm not gonna post this and never come back. I'de like comments/suggestions/critique, etc. I do this "comic" because I enjoy it and don't expect or plan to have many fans. maybe a few :)

Link in sig. Thanks :D
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Story Time
« Reply #1 on: 13 Apr 2005, 16:16 »

Huge avatar, sig image, and plugging your own work. I would be very happy if you fixed one and two, at the very least.
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Deathmole Jacques' head takes up the bottom half of the panel, with his words taking up the top half. He is not concerned about the life of his friend.

daneford

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Story Time
« Reply #2 on: 13 Apr 2005, 17:52 »

Oops, I didn't know :(

I'll fix both.

Also, I'm not plugging my comic as in shameless advertising I actually want critique :)
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Sideways

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Story Time
« Reply #3 on: 14 Apr 2005, 09:50 »

Can't critique it now... as your sig is no longer around.
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daneford

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Story Time
« Reply #4 on: 14 Apr 2005, 11:59 »

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Mockery

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Story Time
« Reply #5 on: 15 Apr 2005, 11:17 »

Are you serious?
Well, maybe.

I don't find it comical, it's not a drawing...
Why is it here, in this 'comics and drawings' thread?

I think you need some help, but not the artistic kind.
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smilingbeef

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« Reply #6 on: 15 Apr 2005, 11:27 »

I agree with mockery.  The concept isn't bad, but it's not funny, it's not drama, it's not avant-garde, it's not surreal, etc, etc, etc.  I just don't see a purpose.
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daneford

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Story Time
« Reply #7 on: 15 Apr 2005, 12:06 »

That's understandable. I guess it's a personal comic or something. Thanks for trying though :D
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