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clasicks

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Flight. (and other)
« on: 25 Jul 2005, 10:17 »
something i sketched up in about 30 minutes, i was going for a minimilistic type style. crits and suggestions are appreciated. (too bad i lost the psd :( )

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b252/clasicks/blackbird.jpg
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heretic

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Flight. (and other)
« Reply #1 on: 25 Jul 2005, 10:35 »
i like it a lot, my only suggestion is smoother edges on the bird if you can manage it
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twentyfour

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Flight. (and other)
« Reply #2 on: 25 Jul 2005, 10:58 »
I think the 'stream' is a great colour, but the two little streams in it are a bit too bright, they kinda take away from the bird's reflection, alpha out to 60-80% it's current opacity. The bird's reflection seems to be almost vibrating, I'd suggest lessen the 'soften fill edges' to half the pixel depth(assuming you used Flash) and alpha out the reflection to 50-75% of it's current opacity
Also, to show some depth you may want to use gradient fills to have the fills get darker as it goes off further to the upper right corner.

Just some suggestions

Looks pretty damn cool though man!
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heretic

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Flight. (and other)
« Reply #3 on: 25 Jul 2005, 11:01 »
....
hibbity jibbity that was to me!
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clasicks

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Flight. (and other)
« Reply #4 on: 25 Jul 2005, 13:13 »
thanks,

and i created this in Photoshop, but maybe ill try flash on my next work
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clasicks

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« Reply #5 on: 26 Jul 2005, 20:43 »
didnt want to start a new thread, just showing some old work. crits again
this is a recreation of a CD, its folds in the middle, the right side is the front and the left is the inside.

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b252/clasicks/gustercd.jpg
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clasicks

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« Reply #6 on: 26 Jul 2005, 20:47 »
this is a WIP, not sure where im going with it, suggestions would be nice :)
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b252/clasicks/ship.jpg
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clasicks

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« Reply #7 on: 26 Jul 2005, 20:47 »
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heretic

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« Reply #8 on: 27 Jul 2005, 06:08 »
you know you could have put them all in one post...
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