I'd like to critique, but I don't know which to talk about. Here are a few general things:
- Unless you really like pens, try using a pencil - that way, you can practice drawing in shadows and things will look more realistic. Lines will go down smoother, and when you want to make a whole area dark, it will be easier to make it the same shade. No joke.
- Don't draw on lined paper! Unless you are in school and there is nothing else, though, because drawing is better than not drawing. Get a sketchbook without lines if you have a chance! It is really cool that your drawings have become part of your journal, but you should give them their own special book because they deserve it.
I really dig the bottom part of "A Million Miles Away," it looks like you spent a while on it - something I'm incapable of doing. That's my favorite. The wall looks great. I also like the clock and the piano a lot, like RollofDimes. You should work on studying the human form - look at the way different people are shaped, because that'll help you draw people. Keep drawing!