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falconire:
I'd like to hear some feedback on a couple of strips I did for my site. Good or ill if you will.

kompan:
I like the drawing style and thick lines, it looks nice.
Also I'd like to see how will it improve after a few months :)

Only the font is a bit too heavy and difficult to read.

falconire:
Some people have said that when it comes to the font but that's really the only character that uses that font. I may end up changing it though.

jeph:
In my opinion it needs a thinner font and thinner word balloon outlines.

Ally:
Moreso on the art than on the comics: try shading! It can be really simple, with just one more color. Just choose a light source and imagine the shape of the objects. If it is done well, it could look really nice.

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