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I wrote something bout blues

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camelpimp:

--- Quote from: Johnny C on 30 Dec 2007, 09:05 ---Well, you did call his writing crap.

I think it's a little stiff, but not really bad. You might benefit from being more conversational in tone when you're writing an informal piece.

--- End quote ---

No, Kallahan didn't. They called his "witting" crap. Which I agree. I'm telling ya, I didn't even chuckle once.

supersheep:
"The writing's crap" is not constructive criticism.

I like it, but I think you should go back and redraft it somewhat. Also, I think that you should also go into a bit more detail about the songs you mention. Otherwise, though, it's a good piece of writing, especially for your first piece of music writing.

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