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BobJoeJim:
You complain about metric deficiency,
But your syllable counts are off by three,
And as for stretched rhymes,
They make wonderful dimes,
As long as you just drop them carefully.
Peet:
I have come to quite a junction
I suffer a degree of compunction
For I find myself shirking
When I should really be working
Making notes on renal function
karl gambolputty...:
Tis not a syllable-count you must meet
Tis the right number of metrical feet
Please repeat after me
"Three three two two three"
With this knowledge you cannot be beat
Patrick:
--- Quote from: BobJoeJim on 08 Mar 2008, 13:56 ---(And Patrick listens to Coldplay)
--- End quote ---
Oh FUCK NO YOU DID NOT.
Got balls of steel, BobJoeJim
But your face is so much like a quim
With a dong in your mouth
Like a place further south
Your rhymes are so weak it's a sin
(we need to take this to spokenvswritten.com or something)
Amaroq:
Wow, some people just can't take critique
Guess they're caught up in their own mystique!
I'll stick by my meter,
'Twas example feeder.
I'm sorry, but our poetry reeks!
;)
However, that's just an aside
I'm willing to quietly abide.
I think BobJoeJim
Should respond to him
As has just stuck a knife in his hide.
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