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DinosGoLauRAWR:
I am a budding digital artist who has never taken art classes, I'd like to know what you all think of my work.
here is a selection of my better art:












 the last and third to last were done with a photo base reference

Z2.:
I like the pseudo-Impressionist styling in #2, try a few themes around that.

I took Art as a subject for 5 years, and I struggle to get what I see down on paper, some people can transfer what they see relatively easily (or so I have heard), others not so, but in all cases a lot of trial and error, and practise is required to perfect your style.

Liz:
I really like them all, actually. I think number one would look great on a t-shirt or tote bag.

Cam:
2, 4: very nice. You seem to have a good grasp on a that style and it works really well.

1: Using a scatter brush with no opacity or even rotation changes looks really bad.  The line work on the three looks great, but the stars just don't compliment it at all.

3: Looks good overall.  It seems like proportions could be slightly tweaked, but considering I still, constantly, get my ass kicked by human proportions, take that with a grain of salt.  Over all, very good

5:  The character looks great, but the background doesn't work with her.

I threw together something since I had a few minutes before work.  Obviously, the buildings are horrible and main star are terrible, but you can see how adding a little opacity and size jitter makes the stars look a lot better.  Also, I threw together a custom brush for the stars so it wasn't the horrible stock one.  They can really make your work look a lot better and take very little time to create.  http://www.uwec.edu/Help/PhotoshopCS3/brushes-cust.htm

Overall, it is good and shows a lot of potential.

ThePQ4:
Actually, that is what I liked about the last one. She doesn't fit in --she looks dark and awkward in a city of lights. I think it's very reflective...

I liked the others too, but it's a toss up between the first one and the last one as my favorite. The 1st would make a really great shirt, like Misconception said!

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