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Critique me please
jeph:
The stars all look pretty lazy when contrasted with the hand-drawn stuff.
The girl in profile's eye should be narrower.
Katherine:
I really like the pink trees one. I would hang it on my wall.
DinosGoLauRAWR:
--- Quote from: jeph on 12 Mar 2008, 10:46 ---The stars all look pretty lazy when contrasted with the hand-drawn stuff.
The girl in profile's eye should be narrower.
--- End quote ---
thanks jeph for stopping to comment, any good points that you see?
jeph:
The tree in the first picture looks pretty good, I like the wood grain effect, but you gotta remember you will only get those whorls in the wood grain where a branch is supposed to be. So the tree just looks like it's been pruned and sanded down, which is probably not what you are going for.
Other than that, I would say you have the basics down but you need to work more on your fundamentals, ie drawing and painting from life, as well as learning crafty photoshop tricks to make your stuff not look like it was done in photoshop.*
*these are also things I really need to do.
Spluff:
Try working at a larger size and spending more time on your works, really work hard on them.
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