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Seigea:
personally, I like all 4 pieces. they don't go together really, but they are each very good for someone without training. i think that no.1 is exceptional. maybe lose the stars and replace them with leaves or fireflys. something like that. or if you want to keep the stars, make them part of the tree like they're growing from it.
i don't know, it's your vision.
i love the style of no.2 very good. a perfect piece for the backdrop of a flash-back or as a painting on a wall or easel
no. 3 is good. it looks like you obviously have a style of your own and that's cool, but the anatomy compared to a real woman is a bit off kilter. still, like i said, your vision
no.4 is interesting. kind of like its the world versus our girl there. maybe some back story puts her at unease about this city. don't hesitate to draw shoulders. everyone has them. i used to have a huge problem drawing women. but they're as easy to draw as men. just a smaller frame with a couple more bends.
still, i like all of it. keep working towards your style. never stop drawing. ^_^

Cartilage Head:
I'm no artist but I think those drawings are really great.

emomanisme:
the first one is great so is the second the third is good but what are those lines on the side of her head?the fourth is good and the character in the last is great (I dont like teh coat but thats a problem with her fashion not your drawing) but the background... needs work
 :-D

Seigea:

--- Quote from: emomanisme on 17 May 2008, 19:18 ---the first one is great so is the second the third is good but what are those lines on the side of her head?

--- End quote ---
they're barrets. you know, like hair clips

emomanisme:
oh. yeah, huh now i feels stupid :oops:

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