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Eris:
Well in the class she was made to read this poem out loud for the rest of the class. The was she read it sped up a lot of the longer lines, so the beat didn't sound so awkward. She basically continued afterwards to give us entirely too much information about the situation of the poem, and tried to justify not being able to rewrite her poems because "It's covering three issues, so I can't really change what I've done".

My teacher (a poet in her own right), was very diplomatic, saying there was a good skeleton of a poem, it just needed work on how to bring out the stuff about her father or whatever. The girl is a big fan of Sylvia Plath, and apparently you can hear that in some of the lines if you take out some of the superfluous stuff and simplify it. I dunno, I'm not big on poetry.

She's going to fail the class anyway, because she turned up to maybe 3 classes, two of them she had to because of this workshop.

Trollstormur:
is this your classmate?

Joseph:

--- Quote from: Eris on 29 May 2009, 17:00 ---The girl is a big fan of Sylvia Plath

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Never would have guessed.

MrBlu:

--- Quote from: Jeans on 13 May 2009, 03:52 ---Well, that certainly is a bunch of words.

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