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Welu:
I'm surprised an art forum doesn't have a section for everyone to show some works in progress. Just show them or specifically ask for critique.

I'm thinking keep this one for still visual things: Drawings and paintings or crafts. Literature and animation/film, you go sort yourselves out.

Rules:

* Be civil, of course. Don't necessarily have to use the sandwich method (Compliment - Critique - Compliment) as long your comment is fairly polite.
* Please avoid vagueness like, "I don't like something about X but I don't know what exactly and have no idea how to make it so I like it".

* Note if you don't want critique at all or do want critique but only on something specific.
* Feel free to link to tutorials, guides, speed videos or any resources which you have found helpful.
* This can also be used to show progress shots of a finished piece.
I think that's everything unless the mods have something to suggest. I'll get the ball rolling with the two main pieces I'm working on right now.

This is some Fallout 2 fanart featuring an original character I've made, called Cressida, my version of the Chosen One. A friend linked me to a wedding dress site and I got inspired. So far my favourite thing I've done is the lamp-ornament-thing-a-ma-jigger.
I'm considering this at the "Nearly done but still loads to do somehow" stage. The main thing I'm looking to fix is the train.


Some Infamous fanart. Specifically the Trashbot boss fight, as can be told by the screenshots.
This is at the, "Oh God, so much to do and I have no idea where to go from where I am" stage.

Carl-E:
Actually, the train looks pretty good - maybe it should lay a little flatter, is all. 

But what's that brown column-thingy?  It looks a bit like a spiral staircase set in the wall? 

Welu:
It's just meant to be a brown-column thingy. It's meant to look like this room.



It should stand out more when the walls are done.

cvcharger:
I'm not sure if this would be the same, but I have uploaded some comics to my facebook page that I drew in my spare time.  These are the links for them.
Bohemian Rhapsody https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=366257420099325&set=a.366255600099507.81786.100001452106764&type=3&theater
Just Ask Her https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=374427772615623&set=a.366255600099507.81786.100001452106764&type=3&theater
Venus Transit https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=378223575569376&set=a.366255600099507.81786.100001452106764&type=3&theater

Originally, these were just ideas I drew in a notebook, and I think after maybe the 10th comic I drew, I decided to upload it to facebook to see what everyone thought.  Then after that, I got the CS5 program on my computer and started playing with it, and that basically explains them.  I had been toying with the idea to start my own webcomic, but I haven't really heard from enough people to determine if that would be a good idea or not.
I may eventually redo the first one on CS5.

cesium133:
I decided to try my hand at making a fan art piece for Dumbing of Age. It's not close to finished yet, but there's enough there that if you read DoA often you could probably guess what scene I'm going for in it:



What I'm eventually planning to make is an animated gif version of the second-to-last panel of this comic that pans into the final frame. Like I said, it's not close to finished; I have to rewrite the rain macros to allow the rain to be animated, and I have to put Amazi-Girl into the scene.

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