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Works In Progress - Give and Get Critique (Still Visual Arts)

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lepetitfromage:
These all look great!!

Welu, I am really enjoying your daily drawings. :-)


And ReindeerFlotilla- those jeans! Love 'em.

ReindeerFlotilla:
Thanks! I'm going to try something different with the jeans. I had a crazy idea last night and I'm gonna give it the old college try. Whatever that is.

ReindeerFlotilla:
So...Feedback time.

Over all, the form is good Welu, but the lines feel...unbalanced. Like they are trying to be tight and loose at the same time. Other than that, I like it. Would view again.

Welu:
Thanks, I see what you mean about the lines. That's probably due to tidying some and not others, I'll try to balance them better when I go back to colour it.

ReindeerFlotilla:


I think (maybe, just maybe) I'm done inventing an art style. Time to get to work, and let incremental improvement increment.



Had to do one more.
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