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est:
your style reminds me a little of Chugworth Academy, also.  which is a compliment, as his art is rather good. it's just the writing that i can't seem to get into.

torg:
actually the face is inspired a lot by CA... I am really bad at drawing faces, and the faces at CA seemed easy to draw *g*

Keith Decent:
it looks really great and solid.

I think maybe yo can add a little more detail in the clothing in certain areas (chest, for example)

I'm not being a perv, it's just that with the wings, and all of their glorious linework and detail, the chest looks like this open expanse of white.  Good fix on the foreshortening.

Maybe the empty space thing is something that can be corrected in the color stage? I don't know what you have planned.  Maybe some textures or patterns, or with shading.

It looks great.  I'm just trying to be constructive cause I think you can make it look amazing.

torg:
Yep... I am going to do some heavy shading after the coloring. that should also fix the "flat chest syndrome" *g*

Kel:
This is lovely!  I agree that the lines are very strong and able-looking.  The wings are nice, and I don't mind the chest at all.  I just thought it was leather, which doesn't tend to conform to curves like cotton and polyester.  :)

If she ended up not liking this, I'd be quite surprised.  Too much detail can, in some cases, kill a picture.  I don't see a problem with it at all, since you fixed the arm.

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