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(Edit) Criticize my attempt at a comic please

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keyoung:
HAHA! I get it!
(boy am I slow)

Kjammer:
You want me to criticise you or your little comic there?

keyoung:
The latter.  
(I am currently attempting to figure out if there is a way to amend my badly titled thread).

Hatebunny:
Well, I can't provide any criticism beyond what's already been said.
The style reminds me of 60s comics...like the kind in those  'Ripley's believe it or not' booklets. The plot is cool, though from what I read there, it seems like that's not your work. The drawing style is pretty professional looking though. I'd just have to agree that the sepia tones be turned to white, and that the text be neater...It was a bit ahrd to read, possibly because it was a small scan/compression.

Try some more!

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