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It's a Duck! a bit of a 'toonish logo up for critiquing

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fenmere:
Just wondering if maybe someone here can help me see flaws in this:

http://pics.livejournal.com/fenmere/pic/0003shph

It's a very early sketch of a logo for my favorite ice cream shop.  The owner and I will discuss ways to make it more logo-y, such as maybe by putting a great big "M" on his apron.  And I will be redrawing him on larger paper to clean him up.  Right now, I'm trying to figure out how to make him feel even duckier.

Thanks!

Jarne:
The body looks a bit like a chickens.

Vlishgnath:
Shop name, or "M" as you say on the apron would be a stellar idea.  Also, I think you did a fab job on the bill.  Only real suggestion I have is the left foot.  It seems a smidge off in comparison.  And possibly some more definition on the waist?  More feather lines or something.

<---- not an artist

Rone:
More duckier, you say?

Well, on scales of duckness, I'd say the head looks just fine.  It goes a little awry for me on the body, tho.  For some reason the shape looks a little more akin to a chicken, not a duck.  Change the tail feathers perhaps?  Or maybe go for more brown or grey?  That might make the image too dull in color tho...

Meh, it looks just fine for a logo.  Probably just leave it as is.  It's a cheery, welcoming image, which is just what you want in that kind of thing.

And dammit, now I really want to eat some ice cream.

fenmere:
Thanks guys!  You're confirming a number of my thoughts.  I'll post a revision shortly today.

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