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It's a Duck! a bit of a 'toonish logo up for critiquing
Gryff:
If it's a logo maybe you should simplify it a little and smooth out the linework. The simpler the better when it comes to logos.
Se7en:
I'd exagerate the "duck" features. Feet, tail, and bill. Just make em all a bit bigger.
Warmada:
--- Quote from: Se7en ---I'd exagerate the "duck" features. Feet, tail, and bill. Just make em all a bit bigger.
--- End quote ---
If there is a reason for the duck logo (such as the name being McDucky's), then Thats a very good idea. Even if it isn't, duckification is a good idea.
Very nice, and with work, it'll be a good logo.
orphæus:
In addition to what's been said (especially se7en's comment; exaggeration wins):
- don't color-match the apron to the head; I spent a while trying to figure out why his 'gut' was pointy like that
- accentuate the shoulder strap more; or get rid of the new color for the chest feathers, same reason
- don't foreshorten the feet anywhere near that much
- rework where the feathers end (tuft on head, 'hands' and tail) so they're not as spaced out
- scrap the nub where his body is in front of the arm holding the ice cream cone; arms have a top and a bottom
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