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Can you hear me Major Tom?
« on: 19 Aug 2006, 10:14 »
Iv'e been working on this in my design class, our assignment was to design a classic rock poster, well at least what bands our teacher liked, and I got David Bowie.

Comments and ideas? This is our first project and I want it to rock.( Though it's not as impressive as a phonograh made out of legos.)
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« Reply #1 on: 19 Aug 2006, 10:46 »
CRAFTS PEOPLE.
THIS IS THE ARTS AND CRAFTS FORUMS, NOT THE DRAWINGS AND DIGITAL THINGY.

That said, it's quite nice. Fill that big empty space in the middle/top.
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« Reply #2 on: 19 Aug 2006, 10:50 »
I plan to,  I plan to put David Bowie in big plink letters.
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« Reply #3 on: 19 Aug 2006, 15:56 »
the bottom left david doesn't seem to blend into the black as well as the others.
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« Reply #4 on: 19 Aug 2006, 17:23 »
Quote from: Spinless
CRAFTS PEOPLE.
THIS IS THE ARTS AND CRAFTS FORUMS, NOT THE DRAWINGS AND DIGITAL THINGY.

That said, it's quite nice. Fill that big empty space in the middle/top.


Just to adress this: The titles are a little misleading. The "Comics and Drawings" forum lends one to believe it's for comicy drawings, whereas this one is for "Arts and Crafts.
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« Reply #5 on: 19 Aug 2006, 23:42 »
Too true KibBen, I honestlyagree with you, or mabey it tis the late night techno and caffine rush.
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« Reply #6 on: 19 Aug 2006, 23:55 »
The biggest problem is the empty space on the lower left hand side of the poster. You need to fill that space a bit more.. perhaps shifting one of the images further to the left or placing another one in; otherwise it's just off balance to the eye... while the white at the top right does help a little.
I think once you have the text added in it will look a lot better as well.
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« Reply #7 on: 22 Aug 2006, 16:03 »
Almost done.
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« Reply #8 on: 22 Aug 2006, 16:06 »
the left side needs a little something
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« Reply #9 on: 22 Aug 2006, 20:59 »
I see, well im looking for another Bowie phase, or I could draw in a SPIDER FROM MARS!!!!!!!!!!!!..yeah, late night caffine rush, im a little goofy.
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« Reply #10 on: 23 Aug 2006, 02:04 »
I think the background looked better black in white, but that it would be best with a darker color instead of purple.
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« Reply #11 on: 23 Aug 2006, 03:55 »
The elements are too seperate from each other. Try posterising the bowie photos.
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« Reply #12 on: 23 Aug 2006, 19:26 »
I have to have some elements of  colour in it for the grade, but I will take a look at the posterising...
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