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need advice/criticism/screams of pain (UPDATED 5/17)

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Mikendher:
Alright, I've changed a couple things:

Michael Jermyn - Scarecrow

I tried redoing the oooh part... but it lacked the punch of my previous attempt... it was too plain. I realized that the harmonic dissonance was actually making it sound better (at least to me), so I merged the previous vocal tracks with my recent attempt. Now the oooh part has 16 vocal tracks, hah. I think it sounds good (better at least). I also undistorted the remaining small distorted vocal thing: "we don't care, don't you care", and changed/added a couple small things. I tried adding different drum parts, but it never sat quite right, so I scratched that. I also tried redoing the bass and the "on fire" part, but couldn't improve upon them. Let me know what you think.

Johnny C:
Those "ooos" are fucking rad, and the coda's very Arcade Fire. Dude I am loving this! I think this is the best quality you'll get from a demo, and I would be very happy with it if I was you.

Mikendher:
Thanks! I am quite happy with it. Thank you for all of your help. :-)

Now I just have the impossible task of making this fit in with the rest of my music.

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