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comics and drawings!!... Constructive criticism welcome and needed
Teh Geek Lord:
Its my first sketch on my tablet, and my first real attempt at some sort of background, so be gentle, please. *braces for rape*
Seigea:
sweeeeeeet :mrgreen:
Teh Geek Lord:
Alright, page 3, 4, and 5 are finished... 6 didn't come out how i wanted, so it will be redone, in place of 6, enjoy a WIP of page 7...
This one has a rough background, its a layout for when I go though it in photoshop, but I'm seriously giving effort to layouts and designs on backgrounds... it just might not show well right now
And because 6 didn't come out as I planned, here is a WIP of page 7 (should give you an idea of what happened in page 6 :P
Enjoy and tell me what you think!!!!
Ikrik:
Honestly, it looks pretty nice. However are you going to use colour or are you keeping it with the black and white layout? If you're colouring it then the lines are fine but with black and white you'll need to add a lot more shading and detail into it. Just keep drawing it, just keep going. You might find as you keep going and get more comfortable and better with your drawing that you'll want to completely redraw everything again. There are some text-confusion issues but I'm sure you'll sort that out and there are a few spelling mistakes which, again, aren't huge issues. You got a great perspective thing going, so just keep it up.
Seigea:
I like it. It'll grab a readers attention and force them to ask questions about the story. Good Move
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