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comics and drawings!!... Constructive criticism welcome and needed
Teh Geek Lord:
--- Quote from: Ikrik on 26 May 2008, 21:51 ---Honestly, it looks pretty nice. However are you going to use colour or are you keeping it with the black and white layout? If you're colouring it then the lines are fine but with black and white you'll need to add a lot more shading and detail into it. Just keep drawing it, just keep going. You might find as you keep going and get more comfortable and better with your drawing that you'll want to completely redraw everything again. There are some text-confusion issues but I'm sure you'll sort that out and there are a few spelling mistakes which, again, aren't huge issues. You got a great perspective thing going, so just keep it up.
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I plan on finishing them in two ways... one being a colored wat via photoshop, and then finishing the paper originals in black and white shading. But right now, I'm trying to forge ahead and get a story rolling for the comic.
Trollstormur:
fuck yeah the nintendo zapper
Seigea:
lol his gun DOES look like the zapper!
Teh Geek Lord:
troll, I LOVE you, man! That was funny!
Teh Geek Lord:
***its a double post, sorry***
But I have some sketches I'm looking for constructive criticism on if you please...
Just looking for opinions on weather or not to pursue finishing these two sketches (both sketched in under 30 minutes)
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